Friday, January 31, 2014
Part IV...Sky High Mind Blowing...
As I am going into my fourth chapter, I've come to realize that this book was actually just has the same ending or conclusions as the previous chapters, but it has a different interesting scenery. I strongly feel like this was another black woman falling for a gorgeous man, who eventually pleased her like no one else have. I am really hoping to see if there was anything different. In the beginning, it really caught my attention, it was clever, and it stated "Red, the color of blood, of life, of rage, of love. Her color." It was making sense to me personally, although I was thinking of a red head crazy chick, but I was wrong. It was describing her favorite color and the different shades of red. Red made her feel incredible and I understood, although People Magazine stated that guys who wear red is actually complimentary and attractive to women. In this story, the shades of red expresses her emotions when she wears them, clothes that is. I believe everyone relates to it. For example, when I dress up in public, it depends where I'm going or what I want to wear. If I wore a shirt, pants, and sneakers, it expresses comfortability. Wearing a dress shirt, slacks, and boots expresses confidence and comfort, especially a bit flamboyant. This really boost your ego and feeling great with nothing to loose. Furthermore, the quote was from a poem and had so much more to it, it was written from a writer named Maya Angelou. Eventually, I searched and she does exist. I love how it is realistic and makes me wonder now that all the characters in this book maybe Nia (the author) the whole time and she is expressing herself, so no one would judge her. Moving on, the girl who was intrigue by the poem and loves red is Felicia. Felicia seemed pretty young like in her early twenties, because of how she reacts in the story like a kid getting their Christmas gifts that they've longed for. Surprisingly, that wasn't a hook up like the previous chapters. Felicia had a boyfriend and his name is Malik. Their connection was great and simple. Simple is better than most. She had a great instincts and she was the girl that guys should be with. Reason is because she knew her boyfriend inside out and accepted it. It seemed very natural for them to be together and it is like a couples dream to be. LL Cool J pops up in the middle of the story and is another fact that he exist, he is an attractive male rapper whos signature was licking his lips. and LL Cool J stands for Ladies Love Cool James. Another James! On the other hand, the romantic part was the view of the city during her visit to Malik's workplace building. It was getting better as I continue to read. It got deeper with romance and you can picture how they would be together, so young, so in love, and their beautiful affection. At last, I love you was actually mentioned in this chapter and it keeps getting better, so far this is my favorite chapter. Felicia and Malik secretly planned it on their own, but it turned out that both plans work together naturally and soon they were passionate. Afterwards, they began to conversate about everything and I find it cute. I was amazed that Malik really showed his love towards Felicia, and every guy should be like him in this city or better yet the world.
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Do you find any techniques in the writing you would to try? Word choice? Building tension?
ReplyDeleteYes I've continued to use other vocabularies and also enhancing my sentences.
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